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Larry

Deviation Actions

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Lunged late. Lacerated ligaments. Lost Legs.
for a six word story!
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3wyl's avatar
Oh dear. o.O

This is amazing... in the sense that the choice of words you have used greatly reflect the situation, and I think you've conveyed the impact of things very effectively too, you know?

It's brilliant how you've described it, but hell, I wouldn't want to go through it myself. ^^;

It's cool how you've left it open to interpretation in terms of what actually happened. o.O